Time (Random Poet I wrote in my 2nd year #2)

Time...
Could you give me some of your time?
Your time from 24 hours a day
Your time from 7 days a week
Your time for one day in life
Just to be with me... and only me
and you... just you.
I don't mind waiting
But I want these little time to be spent with me
To fill this longing heart
To take away emptiness within me
I'm lonely
In this very big world
I almost lost
In my deep loneliness
No one would care if I ...
(Last word still waiting to fill till I'm fed up being lonely)

I wrote this poet also in my 2nd year as an English student of Mulawarman University. This poet was my feeling that time. And now I think I have found the right words to fill the last line. It was when I finally brave enough to ended it and I felt so much better than before to release all that burdened me... and I am so much happier now, thousand times, or maybe millions billions zillions time happier!!!!  ;)

Random poet I wrote in my 2nd year #1

All surrounding me is black
It's empty place in empty mind
I don't think about anyone
'coz no one think of me
I go now and then
to find for happiness
which buried so deep inside of me
I've forgotten
How does it feel
Since no one comes to me and wipe my tears
I just can find myself
Whining and crying for some happy feeling

This is my poet, I wrote this poet in my second year as an English student. Hehehehe.... My grammar is kind of ... errr.. hahaha error!!! Laughing out loud* So maybe I should re-write this poet with some of grammar correction and modification ;)

All surrounding me is black
It's an empty place in an empty mind
I do not think of anyone
'coz no one one think of me
I'm searching for happiness
Which buried so deep inside of me
I forgot how does it feel
Since no one comes to me and wipes my tears
I just can find myself
Whining and crying for some happiness

I don't have any intention to give a lot of changes in this poet, :D I just made some grammatical correction to any grammatical error I've made before, and this poet also didn't have any title, so I just give the title with the poet I wrote in my 2nd year #1 ^^